43 thoughts on “Summer Haiku Showdown 2024 Contest

  1. The sun dappled trees sway,
    The garnish of my mother’s dress,
    Green… Gold… Green… Gold…

  2. Flowing cool water,
    Eagle flying overhead,
    Summer time rivers.

    Cool dew lifting up,
    Rushing river cold water,
    A wonderful view.

    Summer heat rejoice,
    Sitting with feet in water,
    Enjoying nature.

  3. Dear Mr. Edwards,

    Greetings for National Meteor Watch Day in the Lightning Safety Awareness Week as we celebrate the National Great Outdoors Month!

    Thank you for the opportunity to submit five haiku with season words (kigo) for the Summer Haiku Showdown 2024.

    The World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, Daruma Museum, Japan, is my primary almanac (saijiki) for kigo, seasonless topics (muki), and for translation of kigo and muki into English.

    Thank you for your consideration. Best wishes.

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    01
    lungfuls in the palm
    hammocks in the horizon—
    wait in the heat wave

    02
    siphon the stillness . . .
    upside down underwater
    mosquito larvae

    03
    silent serenade . . .
    awake to Venus flytrap
    agape in slo-mo

    04
    Van Gogh’s sunflowers
    shimmy on a rainy day—
    grandma’s umbrella

    05
    before the blue hour
    lilting lotus is ajar . . .
    savor with bokeh

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    01
    All Summer Season Word, kigo 季語: heat (of the weather), feeling hot, hotness, atsusa 暑さ(あつさ)

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    02
    All Summer Season Word, kigo 季語: mosquito larvae, wrigglers, bōfuri ぼうふり, 孑々

    Seasonless Topic, muki 無季: stillness, silence, calmness, shizukesa 静けさ

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    03
    All Summer Season Word, kigo 季語: Venus flytrap (Dionaea muscipula), Venus flytraps, Venus’s-flytrap, fly catching plant, haetorigusa, haetori gusa 蠅取草 (はえとりぐさ)

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    04
    Late Summer Season Word, kigo 季語:sunflower, sunflowers, himawari 向日葵 (ひまわり)

    Seasonless Topic, muki 無季: grandmother, grandma, obāsan お祖母さん, お祖母さん

    Seasonless Topic, muki 無季: umbrella, kasa 傘

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    05
    Late Summer Season Word, kigo 季語: lotus, sacred lotus (Nelumbo nucifera), Indian lotus, hasu 蓮

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    Sincerely,

    Monica Kakkar (she/her/hers)
    https://www.linkedin.com/in/monicakakkar/

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